Monday, November 9, 2020

Here is my Waterfall Poem.

 Waterfall

The sun beamed across the golden flowing waterfall, as It poured down. 

The trees look like a meadow of poppies, opening in the sun. 

The water gently flowed down and crashed the stunning water as it hit the bottom exploding into bubbles. 

As the sun hit the waterfall it would already be running down. 

The water was falling down into a pit of bubbles. 

As I Jumped in I could smell the fresh air spreading around me. 

The fiery red trees were swaying to the beautiful sound of the birds chirping and the leaves hitting the ground. 

The waterfall is a golden swaying gown. 

The Rosey red trees were like nature’s blanket of pedals.

As the waterfall hit the bottom it boomed out a groundbreaking echo!

Jade 2020

 


3 comments:

  1. I like the way you focused on one picture.I can really see what your talking about in my head,very descriptive!

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    1. Thanks you Raedyn for your feed back I really appreciate it.

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