Monday, September 14, 2020

The Trouble In The Underwater City!

“The Trouble in the underwater city!” The year 3000 the next generation in the underwater city. The identical twins Jim and Jimmy wore the same tracksuits so they stood out in the trial, but sadly they couldn’t be in the same football teams. So they started fighting like 2 cobras in a box. The twins Jim and Jimmy called the magical kunekune and his pet cobra called Minnie to help solve the problem. They talked to the football coach, but he wasn’t listening he was just stuffing his face with an unbelievable spicy taco. The kunekune solved the problem by making 2 football teams can be together. The football coach offered the kunekune a spicy taco he was about to say no but he said “It will be my pleasure!!!” he chuckled. The football coach replied saying ‘ will go ahead and take as many as you…”The kunekune grabbed as many as he could and ate them as fast as a cheetah chasing a zebra, but as soon as he finished he remembered and YELPED “THE TACOS ARE SPICY'' “ Ya I told you they were spicy did you forget?” “YES!!!!!!!!!!!” The kunekune screeched with a burning hot tough. The kunekune started to feel dizzier and dizzier, then he fell to the ground and sad to say the kunekune died, so the cobra sang “ The KuneKune died so the cobra cried” Then all of a sudden an evil, mysterious witch came along and shouted “WHO IS singing that?” screamed the witch. So the evil Witch locked the crying cobra up in a tight chain box and kept the cobra in her dungeon, while he was starving and thirsty as ever. You could just hardly hear the cobra singing this “ The KuneKune died so the cobra cried the evil Witch locked the cobra up to shut him up” He kept on singing that until the cobra fell fast asleep dreaming about the kunekune coming back to life... “

3 comments:

  1. The story looks great I did not read the whole thing it was to long but it is good.

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  2. Hi Jade my name is Avie I attend Gisborne intermidiate school. I realy liked your writing about the under water city, you could work on adding a pitcure. was it hard? Thanks-Avie

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    1. Thanks Avie. I will try find a picture, It was a little hard because we played this game with these cards and it chooses random cards what you should wright about.
      Thanks Jade

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